Tag: Writing

Narrative Elements in [Elemental]

Today our class got to choose a movie from disney and name the five elements and the movie elments were Characters, Setting, Plot, Conflict and Theme’s. The movie I chose was Elemental elmental was a movie that had all the elements the elements were Fire, Water, Air and Earth here are some facts about the movie Elemntal.

  • Elemental is loosely based on director Peter Sohn’s life and his family’s immigration story to the United States.
  • His parents are Korean immigrants.

Food saftey article

Today our classwas learning food saftey article here are some fact about food saftey

Key facts. Food safety, nutrition and food security are inextricably linked. An estimated 600 million – almost 1 in 10 people in the world – fall ill after eating contaminated food and 420 000 die every year, resulting in the loss of 33 million healthy life years (DALYs).

Food safety is about handling, storing and preparing food to prevent infection and help to make sure that our food keeps enough nutrients for us to have a healthy diet.
The importance of food saftey is each year, millions of Americans suffer — and thousands die — from foodborne illnesses. This is a preventable problem that is damaging to both individuals and the economy, but many of these illnesses can be prevented. Here is my work Fern Food Safety Article

Complex sentences

Today we learned about complex sentence’s 

First Miss Tele’a explained it.

Then we had to go on our chromebooks and do 3 sentence’s

Second we think of a sentence like a (example) Although my friends begged me, I chose not to go to the reunion.

Lastly a independent clause cannot stand by itself but a dependent clause can.

What I enjoyed about complex sentence was detailing the background

Flow chart

In Writing we have been learning about procedural texts.  I chose to write about how to make an egg  Mcmuffin.  Using my writing, I made a flowchart and the shapes I used were oval, diamond and square. Flowcharts can help to make a process easier to understand.  The interesting part about making a McMuffin is that you have to fry it 3 times.

Traveling to dangerous space.

This is my story and my cover the favourite thing I loved doing was the cover because I had so  much ideas. Here is my story and my cover.


Traveling to dangerous space.

My dad and my older brother came and I waited while I was playing games. The day it happened was the 21st of April. It happened at the station where rockets get blasted up into the sky. 

Then somebody quickly stole me and put me into the rocket. The rocket went so fast I almost died but then I pressed the stop button and it stopped and floated in space. I wanted to go to space and I could because I saw an astronaut suit so I went to space. 

While I was outside in space I saw the  Milky Way. I suddenly  went  close to the Milky Way and asteroids came down and suddenly destroyed the rocket ship. I was heartbroken but then my helmet fell off but at the right time my dad jumped out of another rocket ship and saved me.

Luckily when me and my dad came back from space the cops were all there and arrested the bad guy and me and my older brother and my dad, we went to go eat ice cream in the end.