Tag: Writing

Bank Heist Story

Today I made a story about a bank heist it was about four people, each named after playing card suits, they decided to pull off a bank heist. Spade was the planner, known for being sharp and planned. Hearts was a good, persuasive talker, great at charming and distracting people. Clubs is the muscle, strong and scary. Diamond was a tech expert, skilled in hacking and managing gadgets. I also created a Book cover for the story I really hope it is good. Here is my story below my book cover.

Four people, each named after playing card suits, decided to pull off a bank heist. Spade was the planner, known for being sharp and planned. Hearts was a good, persuasive talker, great at charming and distracting people. Clubs is the muscle, strong and scary. Diamond was a tech expert, skilled in hacking and managing gadgets. They carefully planned the robbery for weeks. Spade designed a path into the bank and checked out the security systems. The crew met regularly in a private spot to avoid drawing attention. They studied guard shifts, planned their entry and exit doors, and also designed fake identities to distract the bank staff if things went wrong. On the day of the heist, they dressed in normal clothing to avoid being noticed but if they knew they were robbing the bank, they have a suit and a mask under the clothes if something goes wrong. Spade and Hearts went in first. Hearts started chatting to a bank teller, making small talk to keep her distracted while Spade sneakily snuck behind the counters to grab the cash from the drawers with money. Meanwhile, Clubs stood outside as a lookout, ready to signal them if anything went bad. Diamond stayed in a nearby van, hacking into the bank’s security cameras and disabling alarms. Things went smoothly at first. Hearts kept the bank teller busy, and Spade was quick and well organized. They filled their bags with cash without making any alarms. Just as they were about to leave, the bank manager walked in and looked their way. Hearts, quick on her feet, made another distraction by telling the bank teller about a made up promotion they were offering, buying Spade a little more time. Once the bags were packed, the team made their way outside where Clubs signaled them to come over. They jumped into the van, and Diamond had already changed the GPS, making sure they wouldn’t be followed. They drove to a safe house, far from the bank, where they split up the cash and celebrated their successful heist. The process of the heist brought them closer together, making a really good bonding team. They knew they had pulled off something risky and dangerous, but for now, they were just four friends who completed a Bank Heist.

Meeting a Tiger

This is my recount and here is my story about meeting a tiger and becoming my friend.

On July the 13 , 2019 I was on the plane with my family. My 4 brothers, 1 sister, my mum and my dad were on the plane and suddenly the plane crashed and I was only by myself where all the mountains and where the trees were. The reason why the plane crashed was because one of the wings on the plane was not built properly so all it would do would just fall to its death. This happened all because the person who invented this didn’t build this wing properly. 

First, I started off with my journey trying to get all the food I could get to survive but then this rustling was in a bush and I got closer and it was a baby tiger. But it was hurt and it was hungry as well. I didn’t want to leave this cute little baby tiger out in a dense forest so I took the tiger and fed it food. Soon a couple months later he grew and I was thinking about my family and hoping they were okay and I would see them again one day. I would cry if I saw them.
Next, as time passed seconds turned into minutes, minutes turned into hours, hours turned into days, days turned into weeks, weeks turned into years until I woke up and it was all a dream and my best tiger buddy grew overnight. Turns out it’s my 3 years staying in this big forest where all these beautiful mountains are. But it was time I was going to leave my home and hop on my tiger buddy and try to find my family after the past three years.  
Then, I went through the rivers and I said bye to my home and set on my new journey with my tiger, after days had passed I reached a town which I really didn’t unexpect this to happen then I passed by and I saw one of the people in there house and It looked like one of my brothers and I knocked on his door and said are you my brother and he said fern and I said where is mum and dad and the others and he said they got there own houses in the town. So I panicked and rushed to knock on everybody’s door until I readed a beautiful white house with a black roof and I knocked and it was my family and they said fern and I said mum, dad, brothers and I hugged them and they said haven’t seen you for the past 3 years where were you and I said can I come inside and the yes but they said wait a minute what’s that tiger with you and I said oh when the plane crashed he was only small when I met him, and I said can he be part of the family please please pleassssse. Okay mum said YAAAAAAYAYAYAYYYYAYAYYAYAYYAYAY!  

Film review

Today we had to write about our favourite movie in maniakalani and my favourite movie was Staying connected and it is good for kids because its telling kids to not stay up late and so you can get good rest for a good day of school.

My stories blurb

A 14 year old kawaki who lives in a city called mega city. He does taekwondo training and he is a black belt and is the best out of every single person who does taekwondo. His closest friends are mitsuki and boruto. Boruto is a brown stripe and mitski is a brown they are the best 3 three. So at night when they came over to his to stay for the night but that night the city was attacked find out what happens next….. Here is my work

Finish it

Throughout this year, our Writing group has learnt different aspects of writing a narrative story. This week’s task was to “finish” 6 stories we chose out of the slides Miss Tele’a provided. Here is my work

TREE

Today in writing we did the tree structure. TREE stands for all of the words. So T stands for title, R stands for Reveal, E stands for events, and the last E stands for Ending. Here is my work.