Tag: Writing

Meeting a Tiger

This is my recount and here is my story about meeting a tiger and becoming my friend.

On July the 13 , 2019 I was on the plane with my family. My 4 brothers, 1 sister, my mum and my dad were on the plane and suddenly the plane crashed and I was only by myself where all the mountains and where the trees were. The reason why the plane crashed was because one of the wings on the plane was not built properly so all it would do would just fall to its death. This happened all because the person who invented this didn’t build this wing properly. 

First, I started off with my journey trying to get all the food I could get to survive but then this rustling was in a bush and I got closer and it was a baby tiger. But it was hurt and it was hungry as well. I didn’t want to leave this cute little baby tiger out in a dense forest so I took the tiger and fed it food. Soon a couple months later he grew and I was thinking about my family and hoping they were okay and I would see them again one day. I would cry if I saw them.
Next, as time passed seconds turned into minutes, minutes turned into hours, hours turned into days, days turned into weeks, weeks turned into years until I woke up and it was all a dream and my best tiger buddy grew overnight. Turns out it’s my 3 years staying in this big forest where all these beautiful mountains are. But it was time I was going to leave my home and hop on my tiger buddy and try to find my family after the past three years.  
Then, I went through the rivers and I said bye to my home and set on my new journey with my tiger, after days had passed I reached a town which I really didn’t unexpect this to happen then I passed by and I saw one of the people in there house and It looked like one of my brothers and I knocked on his door and said are you my brother and he said fern and I said where is mum and dad and the others and he said they got there own houses in the town. So I panicked and rushed to knock on everybody’s door until I readed a beautiful white house with a black roof and I knocked and it was my family and they said fern and I said mum, dad, brothers and I hugged them and they said haven’t seen you for the past 3 years where were you and I said can I come inside and the yes but they said wait a minute what’s that tiger with you and I said oh when the plane crashed he was only small when I met him, and I said can he be part of the family please please pleassssse. Okay mum said YAAAAAAYAYAYAYYYYAYAYYAYAYYAYAY!  

Film review

Today we had to write about our favourite movie in maniakalani and my favourite movie was Staying connected and it is good for kids because its telling kids to not stay up late and so you can get good rest for a good day of school.

My stories blurb

A 14 year old kawaki who lives in a city called mega city. He does taekwondo training and he is a black belt and is the best out of every single person who does taekwondo. His closest friends are mitsuki and boruto. Boruto is a brown stripe and mitski is a brown they are the best 3 three. So at night when they came over to his to stay for the night but that night the city was attacked find out what happens next….. Here is my work

Finish it

Throughout this year, our Writing group has learnt different aspects of writing a narrative story. This week’s task was to “finish” 6 stories we chose out of the slides Miss Tele’a provided. Here is my work

TREE

Today in writing we did the tree structure. TREE stands for all of the words. So T stands for title, R stands for Reveal, E stands for events, and the last E stands for Ending. Here is my work.

Recount

Today I did my Recount it was called going to space dangerously! The 5 W’s where

Who, My dad and my brother and me

Where, At the station where all the rocket’s 

When, April 21st

Why, Because he probably needed to have a person in company

How did you get there? In the car